Dear Mr. Brown,
First of all, I'd like to say thank you for considering my work as perhaps a suitable fit to your team of experts. I'd also like to say that I am a huge fan of your work and I believe I would fit in well with your business. To really emphasize exactly how I felt during my writing of this piece, I first must say how emotionally invested I have been. My piece's topic of school shootings has been very controversial recently, and it is a hard one to approach due to the catastrophic happenings in Umpqua, Oregon a week ago. I'd have to say that my most difficult time with this topic was figuring how to approach it. How could I leave a lasting impression upon the public of that would reflect my anger, but also would be professional and would offer satisfactory solutions to the issue at hand? The only way I could overcome this curious predicament was to just dive in. When I began to discuss my topic as professionally as I could, I believe my anger was brought forth, but not with complete malice. Some 'aha' moments in my paper included after i had finished the paper altogether. During the writing process, I felt my paper was terrible, but once I read it aloud in peer review, I felt like it was genuine and offered solutions while still being backed by sources.
The topic I chose made writing the Unessay quite difficult. Although I may have been a bit 'fired up' about the topic because of current events at the time, I could not relate to it in many ways because I have never been involved in any school shootings. Shootings rarely, if ever, happen in my home town, and I have never had to worry about them. It felt almost like my paper was a good start, but the topic of choice left me with no credibility to back up my thesis. I was just another writer discussing his own opinion, which pathetic when it comes to making much of a difference in the world. Despite this setback, I felt like the best part of my Unessay were my sources. Because I had no credibility myself, I attributed to others' works to back up my own. I believe my audience of the general public would have listened to someone else's voice other than just my own.
Once again, I would like to say thank you for considering my work, and I look forward to any future meetings we may have.
Rory Loe
First of all, I'd like to say thank you for considering my work as perhaps a suitable fit to your team of experts. I'd also like to say that I am a huge fan of your work and I believe I would fit in well with your business. To really emphasize exactly how I felt during my writing of this piece, I first must say how emotionally invested I have been. My piece's topic of school shootings has been very controversial recently, and it is a hard one to approach due to the catastrophic happenings in Umpqua, Oregon a week ago. I'd have to say that my most difficult time with this topic was figuring how to approach it. How could I leave a lasting impression upon the public of that would reflect my anger, but also would be professional and would offer satisfactory solutions to the issue at hand? The only way I could overcome this curious predicament was to just dive in. When I began to discuss my topic as professionally as I could, I believe my anger was brought forth, but not with complete malice. Some 'aha' moments in my paper included after i had finished the paper altogether. During the writing process, I felt my paper was terrible, but once I read it aloud in peer review, I felt like it was genuine and offered solutions while still being backed by sources.
The topic I chose made writing the Unessay quite difficult. Although I may have been a bit 'fired up' about the topic because of current events at the time, I could not relate to it in many ways because I have never been involved in any school shootings. Shootings rarely, if ever, happen in my home town, and I have never had to worry about them. It felt almost like my paper was a good start, but the topic of choice left me with no credibility to back up my thesis. I was just another writer discussing his own opinion, which pathetic when it comes to making much of a difference in the world. Despite this setback, I felt like the best part of my Unessay were my sources. Because I had no credibility myself, I attributed to others' works to back up my own. I believe my audience of the general public would have listened to someone else's voice other than just my own.
Once again, I would like to say thank you for considering my work, and I look forward to any future meetings we may have.
Rory Loe