I usually don't do too much in the field of revision, bad habit really but oh well. I read it over once or twice to make sure there were no terrible grammatical errors and I sent it to a friend to see how it sounded. Everything seemed to check out, so I called it good.
1) Do I explain the statistics I gave well enough?
2) Is the format too boring? The format is pretty boring, but *bleh*
3) I probably should have talked about the fact that it is probably really awkward just to read my paper on the issue, which in itself is an issue, but oh well, too late for that now. That also wasn't a question...
4) Too much humor/too little humor? Who knows? I don't.
Eh, I don't think it's anything special compared to my past work. To be honest, I didn't particularly like the field of topics that the unnessays were supposed to be about. I'm much more excited for the second set, and hope to do something much more creative for that. I do think I should have shown my statistics in a more readable way, but I think it got the message across. I am proud of myself for coming up with a topic that many wouldn't have thought of though, so I hope it works out.